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Therefore, businesses are allowed to work through all over the world by having only a personal computer.
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Is my sentence correct?
Therefore, businesses are allowed to work through all over the world by having only a personal computer.
I don't know the context, but I assume the point you are trying to make is that businesses no longer need big expensive computer systems to conduct business. Technology has advanced so much that you can manage your business with only a personal computer. If so, I suggest:
"Therefore, businesses all over the world are able to work (or you could say "able to manage") by having only a personal computer."
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Therefore, businesses are allowed to work throughout the world by having only a personal computer.
It would be throughout in stead of though all.
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