Description of my best friend
My best friend is a man, because it also is my boyfriend. He is tall, and he is a pale skin. He is brown with green eyes. He is handsome, wonderful and very funny. I think that I am very love of him. He loves swim and run. It’s an entreprenor : he had two comapnies. I really proud of him.
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Description of my best friend
My best friend is a man because it he also is also my boyfriend. He is tall and he is has a pale skin. He is brown with green eyes. He is handsome, wonderful and very funny. I think that I am very much in love of with him. He loves to swim and run. It’s He is an entrepreneur. an entreprenor : he had two comapnies. I really proud of him.
He has two companies. I am really proud of him.
I changed "it" to "he" because when referring to people you use "he" or "she." "It" is used when referring to a thing.
If your boyfriend is brown, he doesn't have pale skin--brown is a dark color. Pale skin is very light. I would say ."He is tall and has pale skin " or "He is tall, brown-skinned, and has green eyes." He can't be both.
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