why should learn English
In my opinion, in this world when you know more language you can communicate with more people, know more culture and have more opportunities.
firstly, I study English to communicate with other countries people, I want to know about all over the world. I believe we come to this world to do a duty, for instance, Edison, he could find his duty and he could do it very well. The first step to finding our duty in the world is know the world and other people and our needs.
secondly, when we know another language we have more opportunities for work and study. literally,
I want to continue my education in Ph.D. in a foreign country so it's important that I know English very well. An important point to study in a foreign country has an IELTS degree.
In conclusion, we must learn other languages to have a better and attractive life. we didn't come to this world for only eating and sleeping.
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In my opinion, in this world when you know more language you can communicate with more people, knowdiscover more cultures and have more opportunities.
Firstly, I study English to communicate with other people from other countries. countries people, I want to know about life and culture [sentence needs a subject - a noun(s) that you are talking about] all over the world. I believe we come to this world to do a duty. For instance, Edison, found he could find his duty and was able tohe could do it very well. The first step to finding our duty in the world is know the world and other people and our common needs [grammatically correct, edited for clarity/meaning].
Secondly, when we know another language we have more opportunities for work and study. Literally,
I want to continue my education inand earn a Ph.D. in a foreign country so it's important that I know English very well. An important pointrequirement to meet to study in a foreign country is to havehas an IELTS degree.
In conclusion, we must learn other languages to have a better and more attractive life. We didn't come to this world for only to eat and sleepeating and sleeping [awkward grammar].
I love your ambition! Your English is very good, and your ideas are better! Keep working hard to earn your Ph.D and do some good for the world. Make sure you capitalize your sentences--this is very important in order to have your writing respected in an academic or formal environment. Feel free to message me any questions. I'm on this website to study Spanish, but I can help out once in a while if you need it.
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