the small cat

A small cat grey color come in the garden. He's very nice. He playing with the ball. That ball in a son.

The cat has hungry. I want food. I find a can ( or tin can?) leeks and beans....oh!it's not possible, the cats aren't eat vegetables. I open the fridge, there are milk. That's right!!

I 'm calling the cat....he's not here.

Le présent

A very nice small grey cat comes into the garden. He plays with a ball in the sun. The cat is hungry. He wants food. I find a can of food...leeks and beans...that is no good. Cats don’t eat vegetables. I open the fridge and there is some milk. That will work. I call out to the cat but he is no longer here/there.

Le passé

A very nice small grey cat came into the garden and he was playing in the sun with a ball. He was hungry and wanting some food. I found a can of food...leeks and beans...That isn’t going to work. Cats don’t eat vegetables. So I opened the fridge and there was some milk and I knew that he’ll like that. So I called to him but he was not there. He has disappeared.

(J’ai écrit deux versions de ton texte. Je pense que le passé marche mieux? Ne t’inquiète pas, c’est les mêmes problèmes pour les anglais en apprenant le français.)

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the small cat

A small grey cat grey color comes into the garden. He's very nice. He is playing with the ball. The ball is in the sun That ball in a son. The cat is has hungry. I want food. I find a can (or tin can? can is fine), leeks and beans....oh! It's not possible, the cats don't aren't eat vegetables. I open the fridge, there is are milk. That's right!!

I'm calling the cat....he's not here.

*... only have 3 periods, not 4