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trip to America Last July, I traveled to America with my friend very first time. I stayed in New York for a week. We visited Metropolitan museum and took(?) a bible tour. She led us relate with Bible things such as Egyptian history, Moses, Babylon and more. I really excited to see Ishtar gate which is a tile that Daniel and 3 friends also saw!!! And a gold goblets which was Nehemiah might touched one. Through this tour I could get more evidence Bible is true. (confident? How do I say 確信した in English...? Actually before this experience I believed what bible said but after this I have more confidence in the Bible. How should I express this nuance...?) Also I realised I have to learn the Bible more deeply. Metropolitan museum was so interesting for me. I’d like to go there one more time.

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確信した : my conviction in the Bible became greater.
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Trip to America

Last July, I travelled to America with my friend for the very first time.
I stayed in New York for a week.
We visited the Metropolitan Museum and took a bible tour.
The guide helped us relate biblical events to Egyptian and Babylonian history, Moses, and more.
I was really excited to see the Ishtar Gate which is a tile that Daniel and three friends had also seen!!!
There were also gold goblets which Nehemiah might had touched.
The information which I had gathered during this tour strengthened my belief in the bible.
(Before this experience, I had always believed in what the bible had said, however after this tour, my belief had strengthened.) <-You could expressed it in this way i guess.
I came to the realisation that I have to study the Bible more deeply.
The Metropolitan Museum was an interesting place. I hope to visit it someday again.
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My trip to America

Last July, I traveled to America with my friend for the very first time.
I stayed in New York for a week.
We visited the Metropolitan museum and took/went on(?) a bible tour.
She led us relate The guide spoke about with Biblical things such as Egyptian history, Moses, Babylon and more.
I was really excited to see the Ishtar gate which is a tile? that Daniel and three 3 friends also saw!!!
And We also saw a gold goblets which Nehemiah was might have touched one.
Through Because of this tour, I received could get more evidence that the Bible is true.
(confident? How do I say 確信した in English...? Actually before this experience I believed what the Bible said but after this I have more confidence in the Bible/I believe in what the Bible says. How should I express this nuance...?)
Also, I realised I have to learn the Bible more deeply.
The Metropolitan museum was so interesting for me. I’d like to go there one more time.
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Last July, I traveled to America with my friend *for the* very first time. I stayed in New York for a week. We visited *the* Metropolitan museum and *we went on* a bible tour. She led us *to* relate with *biblical* things such as Egyptian history, Moses, Babylon and more. I *was* really excited to see Ishtar gate which is a tile that Daniel and 3 *of my other* friends also saw!!! And a gold *goblet* which was *Nehemiah's* (might touched one) (I don't understand this part). Through this tour I *was able to* get (you can also say acquired instead of was able to get) more evidence *that the* Bible is true. Also I realised I have to learn the Bible *to a deeper level*. *The* Metropolitan museum was so interesting *to* me. I’d like to go there one more time.

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