Struggle(please help me find the errors and make the setences more American) First,i want to think my parents for they giving my birth,then i want to thank the people i have seen in this world,especially yours:my friends.\ what i want to say is that since we live in this world,we should do everything that we can do.when we were in the school,teachers always told us''we are not to look for the things,but to make the world coloful''i agreed that time,and now as well,but how to make it?i think the teachers may not know,even they know,maybe they also can't make it,because what they told us is only their dreams.yeah,we make it into ours,but the road to success is difficult,because they are related to our happinesses,jobs,loves and lives!but we won't give up,we will do our best. In this world,we faces many kind things,some evil things either.today they have gone,but tommorrow they will come again.Our faith is:Come on!