A rain day
I am inside my house. Outside it is raining, heavy rain. It is dark and cold. I hear the rain sounds. It sounds music as the drum sounds. the raindrops fall into the roof of the house. The winds are slight, blow over the coco leaves. The feeling is pleased and interesting. I sit down in my chair in my house look through the door. I have a feeling such as heaven. I wish I am the wind. The wind flys over the strange land where I have never known.
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A rainy day
I am inside my house. Outside it is raining, heavy rain. It is dark and cold. I hear the rain sounds. It sounds music as the drum sounds. the raindrops fall into the roof of the house. The winds are slight, blow over the coco leaves. The feeling is pleased and interesting. I sit down in my chair in my house look through the door. I have a feeling such as heaven. I wish I am the wind. The wind flys over the strange land where I have never known.
I am at home and it's raining heavily outside. It's dark and cold. I can hear the sound of the rain, its like someone is playing drums as the raindrops fall onto the roof. A slight wind is blowing the coco leaves, it's pleasing and interesting to watch. I am sitting in my chair, looking through the door and it feels like I am in heaven. I wish I were the wind. The wind flies over strange lands where I have never been.
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A rain day
I am inside my house. Outside it is raining, heavy rain. It is dark and cold. I hear the rain sounds. It sounds music as the drum sounds. the raindrops fall into the roof of the house. The winds are slight, blow over the coco leaves. The feeling is pleased and interesting. I sit down in my chair in my house look through the door. I have a feeling such as heaven. I wish I am the wind. The wind flys over the strange land where I have never known.
I am inside my house and outside it is raining heavily. It is dark and cold. I hear the sounds of rain. As the rain falls on the roof it sounds like drums and music. The wind is blowing lightly over the cocoa leaves. The feeling is pleasant and interesting. I sit in my chair in my house and look through the door. I feel like I am in heaven. I wish that I was the wind because the wind flies over strange lands that I do not know.
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Well done! A poetic piece of writing!
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