Growing up
I would like to write about growing up. Nowdays, for example, have children is a difficult task at least in Spain, where many people have jobs which don´t let them start a family. If you are lucky, your family could help you and start a life without them but I would like to believe in a country without great inequalities.
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You did a great job! I added some suggestions, and removed a word or two to make it more fluent. When you use "nowadays", you don't need "for example" beside it.
I would like to write about growing up. Nowadays, having children is a difficult task, at least in Spain where many people have jobs that do not allow them to start a family. If you are lucky, your family could help you to start a life without them, (meaning your parents?) but, I would rather live in a country without great inequalities.
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Growing up
I would like to write about growing up. Nowdays, for example, having children is a difficult task, at least in Spain where many people have jobs which don´t let them start a family. If you are lucky, your family could help you to start a life without them but I would like to live in a country without great inequalities.
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