My family's Mid-Autumn Festival
Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival. My parents and I went to my grandparents' home and brought a lot of good things for them. My grandparents were very happy to see me and made many delicious food for me. I like the moon cakes made by grandma very much. My grandma said, made the moon-cake spend her three days. My grandma broke open some moon cakes and I see they are filled with five kernels, bean paste and egg yolk.My grandpa took the moon-cake to the garden that we could watch the round, bright. And when we watched the moon we can ate the moon-cake. About eight o'clock, we came to the room and watched the Mid-Autumn Festival TV program. There were many great show on it. Time passed slowly, and we should go home. My grandparents took a lot of moon-cakes to us and let us driving carefully. The Mid-Autumn Festival bring me many happy. I love the Mid-Autumn Festival!
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My family's Mid-Autumn Festival
Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival. My parents and I went to my grandparents' home and brought took along a lot of good things for them. My grandparents were very happy to see me and made many delicious foods for me. I like the moon cakes made by my grandma very much. My grandma said, made making the moon-cakes spend took her three days. My grandma broke open some moon cakes and I see saw they are were filled with five kernels, bean paste and egg yolk. My grandpa took the moon-cake to the garden so that we could watch the round, bright moon. And when we watched the moon, we can ate the moon-cake. About eight o'clock, we came to the room inside and watched the Mid-Autumn Festival TV program. There were many great shows on it. Time passed slowly, and we should [eventually] had to go home. My grandparents took gave us a lot of moon-cakes to us and let us driving told us to drive carefully. The Mid-Autumn Festival bring me many makes me very happy. I love the Mid-Autumn Festival!
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