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Happy the Spring Festival Today is the Spring Festival, and I love it very much. In this day, my parents and I go to my grandparents' home and take a lot of good things for them. My grandparents are very welcome and make some great food for us. We make dumplings for the Spring Festival dinner and watch the Spring Festival TV program together. Everyone are very happy and excited in this day. When the Spring Festival TV program is end, my dad, my grandpa and me go out side and light fireworks together. My grandpa takes the glim to light the fuse and my dad burns it. I can not forget the noise and the smell because they are remembered in my mind. I think I have a great day. I love the Spring Festival. Happy the Spring Festival.

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Happy the Spring Festival

Today is the Spring Festival, and I love it very much. In On this day, my parents and I go to my grandparents' home and take bring a lot of good things for them. My grandparents are very welcome warm and welcoming and make . They prepare some great food for us. We make dumplings for the Spring Festival dinner and watch the Spring Festival TV program together. Everyone are is very happy and excited in on this day. When the Spring Festival TV program is ends, my dad, my grandpa and me I will go outside and light fireworks together. My grandpa takes the glim (not sure what you mean) to light the fuse and my dad burns it. I can not forget the noise and the smell because they are remembered remain in my mind. I think I will have a great day. I love the Spring Festival. Happy the Spring Festival.

Happy Spring Festival to you too.
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请帮忙修改谢谢
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2020年鼠年到,在新的一年到来之际,祝大家在新的一年里,身体健康、工作顺利、新春快乐、万事如意[福]🎉🎉
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请帮我修改,谢谢

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