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Snowed in Tokyo Area It snowed in Tokyo area today. Snow turned into rain already by now. It was first snow in Tokyo area this year. Since we have only a few snowy days in a year in Tokyo area, my kids were all excited to see the first snow in a while, whereas I've been lazily sitting around all day. When it's very cold, I feel like my body functions go dormant and become sluggish. Maybe I was a frog or bear or anything that hibernates in winter in my previous life. I hate winter.

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Snowed in Tokyo Area

It snowed in THE Tokyo area today. THE Snow WOULD HAVE turned into rain already by now. It was THE first snow in THE Tokyo area this year.

Since we have only a few snowy days in a year in THE Tokyo area, my kids were excited to see the first snow THAT THEY HAVE SEEN in a while, whereas I've been lazily sitting around all day.

When it's very cold, I feel like my bodILY functions go dormant and become sluggish. Maybe I was a frog or bear or SOMETHING that hibernates in winter in my previous life.

I hate winter.



such a great paragraph with only minor errors !! :) just have to be careful of definite articles !

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