состояние + 着
在房间里有多东西。
桌子上放着一个电脑，一个台灯，也一个杯子。
杯子里放着两个铅笔。
台灯下放着一束花。
束花左边放着漂亮电子表。
桌子下放着一个垃圾筒。
桌子后边放着方便的椅子。
椅子后边是墙。
墙上挂着三张黑板。
黑板上挂着多小照片。
一个黑板是白色的。
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состояние + 着
在房间里有多东西。
桌子上放着一[个]台电脑，一个台灯，[也] 还有一个杯子。
杯子里放着两[个]支铅笔。
台灯[下放着]底下有一束花。
[束花] 花的左边[放着] 有一个漂亮电子表。
桌子下[放着]面有一个垃圾筒。
桌子后边[放着]是一个[方便] 可折叠的椅子。
椅子后边是墙。
墙上挂着三[张黑板]块板子，
其中一个板子是白色的。
There is only one thing confusing, 黑板means black board literally, and you said 白板 means white board, it's contradictory. So you can use 板子，which is a general usage.
What's more, please pay attention to 量词，if you describe all thing using" 一个” it's ok, but not professional.
I've suggested other 量词，e.g.一台电脑，一支铅笔，etc.
The last thing is that, you can use "有一个“ to replace "放着” , otherwise it's maybe a bit boring. Try to use some paraphrasing, it'll be better.
All in all, I know learning Chinese is not easy. Read more, output what you've learned. And on italki, there are a lot of warm hearted people who can give a favour. Good luck.
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