A formal letter
Dear Mr. K. Simpson,
I am writing in reply to your request for information on dance shows which your students could see during their visit here next month.
There is a wide range of shows to choose from, but there are two which I believe would be of particular interest to your students.
Firstly, the very popular dance group called 'Stravaganza' will be performing in Buenos Aires for the second time in two years. According to the publicity, the show combines dance, acrobacy, a fusion of rhythms and an exquisite humor.
Another option which sounds enjoyable is the group of acrobats called 'Cirque du Solei'. I saw them in two previous occasions and I would certainly recommend going to see their latest show.
I feel certain your students would enjoy either of the shows I have described.
If you would like any further information, please don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerily
Rita Kuyper
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This is a pretty excellent entry. The only corrections are pretty minor: you don't need the word 'an' and you mis-spelled sincerely. Those are the only errors--not enough for me to do a full correction :-)
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