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The decision of change our life. The British royal family "are in shock". The prince Harry announced on Instagram that he will move on to Canada with his wife and son, to live away from paparazzi and journalists, to build a new life regardless of his title. There are many reasons which a person (indeed a couple) decide to change the life. Could be to focus on a new career, to pursue a better quality of life, etc. No matter the reason, ts is totally personal and it has pros and cons. But when a British Royal family member has this kind of decision, it call attention of the world. Some questions are in our mind, as "How crazy can be a person to leave the comfort of living as a prince ?" or "Are they extremely upset in living in a strict regime with all paparazzi chasing them ?" We do not need to judge a person with his decision. It is unfair. But the way that it was announced that is a bit weird. Why does he announced it on social media "without the consensus" of the royal family. Is it a action to force a "freedom", because the family do not accept this decision ? Everyone has a decision of what kind of life to follow. We have only one life and we need to seek happiness. If the person is leaving a title because would like to live in another place they believe will have better conditions to live as a family... It is their own decision. But if after a while they regret of this decision? Well, it will be another controversial topic.

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The decision to change one's life.

The British royal family "are in shock". Prince Harry announced on Instagram that he will move on to Canada with his wife and son, to live away from (avoid) the paparazzi and journalists, to build a new life regardless of his title.

There are many reasons why a person (or indeed a couple) decides (would decide) to change their life. (It) Could be to focus on a new career, to pursue a better quality of life, etc. No matter the reason, it is totally (entirely) personal and (it) has (its) pros and cons. But when a British Royal family member (member of the British royal family) has makes this kind of decision, it call garners the attention of the world.

Some questions are in our (come to) mind, such as,"how crazy can be a person be to leave the comfort of living (life) as a prince" (or/,) "are they extremely (so) upset in living in (such) a strict regime with all the paparazzi chasing (hounding) them?" We do not need to judge a person with on/by his (their) decision(s). It is (it/that would be) unfair. But the way that it was announced (that) was a bit weird (odd/unusual). Why did he announced it on social media "without the consensus" of the royal family. Was it (this) an action to force a "freedom", because the family do not accept (would not have accepted) this decision?

Everyone has to make a decision (decide) of what kind of life to follow lead. We have only one life and we need to seek happiness. If the (a) person is leaving a (chooses to renounce their) title because they would like to live in another place where they believe they will have better conditions to live as a family (it would be better to raise a family)... It is (,of course,) their own decision. But if after a while they regret of this decision, well then, it will be (only lead to) another controversial topic (controversy).

Well-written!

  1. Recommend replacing the underlined with the alternatives in brackets and including the other additions in brackets
  2. Paparazzi are usually a defined group, 'the', particularly, the paparazzi in Britain. Sometimes, 'the' isn't needed.
  3. Recommend using the word 'totally' less often - unless you're an American teenager.
  4. Consider the use of 'choice' instead of over-using the word 'decision'.
  5. Common expressions: 'come to mind', 'living life as a..'
  6. A controversial topic - race, a controversy - this event!
  7. 'Renouncing' isn't accurate but reads better - not clear on the news story - seems he just wants to work 'part-time'. Anyhow, hope corrections/suggestions (are) of help!


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The decision to change our life.

The British royal family "are in shock". Prince Harry announced on Instagram that he will move to Canada with his wife and son, to live away from paparazzi and journalists, to build a new life regardless of his title.

There are many reasons why a person (indeed a couple) decide to change their life. Could be to focus on a new career, to pursue a better quality of life, etc. No matter the reason, ts is totally personal and it has pros and cons. But when a British Royal family member makes this kind of decision, it calls to the attention of the world. Some questions are in our mind, as "How crazy can be a person to leave the comfort of living as a prince ?" or "Are they extremely upset in living in a strict regime with all paparazzi chasing them ?" We do not need to judge a person for his decision. It is unfair. But the way that it was announced is a bit weird. Why does he announce it on social media "without the consensus" of the royal family. Is it an action to force a "freedom", because the family do not accept this decision ?

Everyone makes a decision of what kind of life to follow. We have only one life and we need to seek happiness. If the person is leaving a title because they would like to live in another place, they believe they will have better conditions to live as a family./ a better family life.. It is their own decision. But if after a while they regret (no preposition here) this decision? Well, it will be another controversial topic.

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