Football story
I started playing football last year, my brother started two month earlier than me. In the beginning I didn't wanted to play, but my dad said that most girls don't play football, so the ones that play looks cool. When I started to play I was the worst player in my team and I still am, but I'm getting better. This year I played in two teams at the same week because I train on both Tuesday and Friday. There is always a football match on Saturday and one time it's my Tuesday team against my Friday team, so I had no idea which team to help. This year I've only done two gols and sometimes I'm the reason that my team lose, I'm not sure if I like football or not, because when I win I like it and when I loose I don't.
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Football story
I started playing football last year, my brother started two months earlier than me. In the beginning I didn't wanted to play, but my dad said that most girls don't play football, so the ones that play looks cool. When I started to play I was the worst player in my team and I still am, but I'm getting better. This year I play in/on two teams at/during the same week because I train on both Tuesday and Friday. There is always a football match on Saturday and one time it was my Tuesday team against my Friday team, so I had no idea which team to help. This year I've only scored two goals and sometimes I'm the reason that my team lose, I'm not sure if I like football or not, because when I win I like it and when I loose I don't.
In American English “football” is referred to as soccer. Good job on your writing. In our country girls play just as much as boys. I did the corrections without highlighting as I am editing on my phone and it is hard to select text.
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Football story
I started playing football last year, while my brother started two months earlier than me. In the beginning, I didn't want to play since my dad said that most girls don't play football. But the ones that play looked really cool so I tried playing the game. I started to play as the worst player in my team and I still am, but I know I'm getting better. This year I played in two teams at the same week where I train on both Tuesday and Friday. One time, there was a football match on Saturday. Coincidentally, my Tuesday team was competing against my Friday team on that day, so I had no idea which team to help. This year, I've only done two goals, and sometimes I'm the reason why my team lost. Now, I'm not sure if I like football or not; because when I win I like it, and when I lose I don't.
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