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First notebook entry: Introducing myself hello, i am your new friend---maggie,nice t meet you i like reading , better is about history,but i am not know our history well English is my major in collage ,i like English ,i hope i can know more about the world and more culture

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hello, i am your new friend---maggie,nice t meet you
i like reading , better is about history,but i am not know our history well
English is my major in collage ,i like English ,i hope i can know more about the world and more culture

 

Hello Maggie.  Here is how I would write your introduction.

 

Hello, I am your new friend ---Maggie.  Nice to meet you.  I like to read, history more than anything else, but I dont know our history well.  English is my major in college.  I like to study English.  I hope I can learn more about the world and about other cultures.'

Your English is good.  Here are a few pointers (tips).

In English it's important to begin the first word of each sentence with a capital letter.  The pronoun "I" is always capitalized.

When we use the verb "to like" we would use "better" only if we're talking about more than one thing. (Better is the comparative form of good and compare means to consider more than one thing.)  We sometimes say, "'I like history better than anything."  Also, that verb takes a direct object, so we could say "I like reading history most of all."  We don't usually use "about" when the object is simply "history," but we could say "I like reading about the history of other countries."

A "college" is a school.  A "collage" is a type of artistic work.

In English we do not always use "know" in exactly the same was as the Chinese use

知道.  When we acquire new knowledge, we often use the verb, to learn.  After we have learned sth, then we knowit.

Very good.

 

 

 

 

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