[205 Planning My Trip In Myanmar 1] Would you mind correcting my essay or writing ? If you were me, how would 
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Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are more clear. I hope you can understand this. I’m going to Myanmar for about ten days on end of January. This trip, I’m plan to visiting almost Yangon area. At first, I thought visiting Mandalay, Bago and Inken Lake. Probably, I’ll be visiting those in the further future. There are a lot of Buddhist temples and pagodas in Myanmar. I’ll be seeing them as much as possible. I heard that the weathering Myanmar is pretty nice and dry seasoning that time, I’ll be staying there comfortably. Also I checked transportation what they have. I’ll be taking buses, trains and Grab taxis. Grab is like Uber. They serve noble car, bike,tuk-tuk ( wheeled contraption pulled by bike or bicycle) and so forth. We can use and book by application of cellphone . It very convenience and affordable. I’ll observe local culture and people. How different among Thailand, Cambodia and Vietnam. I heard that some people describe Myanmar is mixed Thailand, China and India.