Chinese culture letter
Dear Professor,
I am writing this letter for the purpose to accept the invitation and give a presentation about Chinese culture to a group of international students. I have been eager to have the opportunity to do my bit for promoting Chinese culture. So I will carefully prepare for it .
The key points for my presentation are as follows . First of all. If people want to learn more about Chinese history culture should go to the museums and tourist spots . Such as Tian'an'men building ,Gugong ,Nanjing museum and so on .What's more ,If people want to know more about Chinese culture of food . They can go to diffident place eat some local food . For example ,Sichuan hot pot and Guang Dong dim sum ,which can repretily China's areas culture . Furthermore ,Chinese new year reflect Chinese culture . Because newyear's day is very significantly in China . It is usually the biggest family gathering for most families ,so everyone is supposed to go home to join the celebration .
That'all for my presentation . I wish you could give me some advice on it . Thanks a lot for playing due attention to the letter . I am looking forward to replay at your earliest convince .
Yours sincerely
Alice
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Chinese culture letter
Dear Professor(1),
I am writing this letter for the purpose to(2) accept the invitation and give a presentation about Chinese culture to a group of international students. I have been eager to have the opportunity to do my bit(best) for promoting Chinese culture. So I will carefully prepare for it (carefully).
The key points for my presentation are as follows . First of all. If people want to learn more about Chinese history culture (, they) should go to the museums and tourist spots . Such as Tian'an'men building square ,Gugong (Forbidden city) ,Nanjing museum and so on (and so forth) .What's more ,If people want to know more about Chinese culture of food . They can go to diffident(different) place eat some local food . For example ,Sichuan hot pot and Guang Dong dim sum ,which can repretily(are popular at that certain) China's areas culture . Furthermore ,Chinese new year reflect Chinese culture . Because newyear's day is very significantly in China . It is usually the biggest family gathering for most families ,so everyone is supposed to go home to join the celebration .
That'all for my presentation . I wish you could give me some advice on it . Thanks a lot for playing due (paying) attention to the letter . I am looking forward to replay at your earliest convince .
Yours sincerely
Alice
Correction:
(1) It would be better to add the professor's surname here. It imply you are writing the letter to a specific professor. Eg. Dear professor Oak...
(2) Preposition and gerund mistake: it should be for the purpose of accepting (after the purpose of - verb should be added -ing
Note: There is an English name for most tourist spots: e.g. Tiananmen Square, Forbidden City, and etc, try to use their English name and don't use for direct translation(e.g. Gugong)
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