The challenge of staring a new career after graduation
Nowadays ,the ratio unemployment of the fresh graduates has dramatically increased which makes people from nearly all walks of life pay attention to issue that how can fresh graduate successfully star a career.
From my perspective, causes giving rise to this phenomenon, may lie in aspects as follows. First of all ,there is no denying that Practical is to work what water is to fish. However, most of fresh graduate have ample speculative knowledge but exactly little practice. Additionally, fear of facing up to the obstacles they might meet also can trigger such challenges.
To sum up, measures to handle challenges above are various, but the core of them are always persistence, diligence and dedication.I do believe that only those who never give up can ultimately achieve their aspirations.
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The challenge of starting a new career after graduation
Nowadays, the unemployment rate of the fresh graduates has dramatically increased which makes people from nearly all walks of life pay attention to issue of how fresh graduates can successfully start a career.
From my perspective, the causes of this phenomenon are as follows. First of all, there is no denying that practice is to work what water is to fish. However, most fresh graduates have ample speculative knowledge and little practice. (Using however and "but" together in this sentence is a bit awkward! The two clauses do not contrast!^^) Additionally, fear of facing up to the obstacles they might meet also can trigger challenges.
To sum up, measures to handle the challenges above are various, but the core of them are always persistence, diligence and dedication. I do believe that only those who never give up can ultimately achieve their aspirations.
This is a great entry! Mostly you had some spelling mistakes.^^
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