Sophia's notebook entry: Jul 03, 2010

It is the seventh day that I have been away from my home and my friends.  The seventh day I leave from my home and my friends, I am doing all everythings by myself.  Sometimes I fell lonely, because I am alone and far from home.  Sometimes I feel afraid because I am afraid worry that my friends would will forget me.  But I told tell myself that I must persist stick with by my choice.

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You're friends will always remember you. ^^  

"stick with" is a little saying that is kind of a way of saying "persist".  It sounds more natural.

Good work. ^^

Sophia's notebook entry: Jul 03, 2010

It is the seventh day that I leave from my home and my friends. I have to do all things by myself. Sometimes I feel lonely, because I am alone and far from home. sometimes I feel afraid，and I am afraid my friends would forget me. But I tell myself I must persist in my choice.