Please check my sentences I think that if someone wants to ahead in success, there is the most important quality the person who should have, which is self-discipline. If you don't follow the schedule,

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Please check my sentences I think that if someone wants to ahead in success, there is the most important quality the person who should have, which is self-discipline. If you don't follow the schedule, you might waste a lot of time on unnecessary things; furthermore, the works which should accomplish today will be delayed.

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I think that if someone wants to ahead in success, there is the most important quality the person who should have, which is self-discipline. If you don't follow the schedule, you might waste a lot of time on unnecessary things; furthermore, the works which should accomplish today will be delayed.

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I think that if someone wants to succeed, the most important quality a person should have is self-discipline. If you don't follow a schedule, you might waste a lot of time on unnecessary things. Furthermore, works that should be accomplished today will be delayed.

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