The first snow
Last night, it snowed for the first time this year, which makes the surroundings look like winter. In the morning, when I pulled back the curtains, I was stunned by the scenery, with all trees covered by white snow, making outside look like a fairy tale world. Then I stood beside the windows for a while, and noticed some childern making paintings by snow. Apperently, snow can make all people excited, no matter what age you are at. Such a delighted morning!
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The first snow
Last night, it snowed for the first time this year, which makes the surroundings look like winter. In the morning, when I pulled back the curtains, I was stunned by the scenery, with all the trees covered by in white snow, making outside look like a fairy tale world. Then I stood beside the windows for a while, and noticed some childern making paintings pictures by in the snow. Apparently, snow can make all people excited, no matter what age you are at. Such a delightful morning!
Quite good, Chengyu Li. These are just problems with expressions, and that takes time to learn them - we need to read lots! Keep practicing. Simon.
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