91｜Does this sound natural? Please correct my English if it is wrong.
Q: What do you want to do right now?
A: I want to go to a southern island! From today, it getting colder really fast and gray sky. I want warm and to look at blue sky! However, I can't go there such a suddenly, so I decided go to a hot spring at near my house tmr!
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91｜Does this sound natural? Please correct my English if it is wrong.
Q: What do you want to do right now?
A: I want to go to a southern island (or you could just say "I want to go south")! From today, it (is) getting colder really fast and (the sky is gr(e)y). I want (to be) warm and to look at blue sky! However, I can't go there (now), so I (have) decided (to) go to a hot spring at near my house (tomorrow)!
I put my changes in (brackets). I am native English Speaker from Australia.
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