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Today I was an interesting exchange language, we talked about Liverpool.
I was in Liverpool last weekend for tourism, and I like this city. I think it's small and comfortable. The weather was a typical English time (raining and cloudy) but I like rain.
I visited the Albert Dock, the Beatles museum, the main cathedral and definitely I would like to live in an English city. I love the language and multicultural society, but If I move to live in GB always I would come back to Spain to spend time in summer :).
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Last exchange conversation
Today I had an interesting language exchange experience, (with X) , we talked about Liverpool.
I was in Liverpool last weekend as a tourist, and I like this city. I think it's small and comfortable. The weather was typically English (raining and cloudy) but I like rain.
I visited the Albert Dock, the Beatles museum, and the main cathedral and definitely I would like to live in an English city. I love the language and multicultural society, but If I move to GB; always I would come back to Spain to spend time in summer :).
Very good but you did not tell us who is the 'we' you mentioned. All English natives would pick up on this and say. 'who is the we?' ' why did you say we? ' who is we?' it would irritate them and sound unnatural.
Today I had an interesting language exchange experience in liverpool with italki members we talked about. .....
Grammatically it is obvious that we = you and the language exchange partners but this is a common phenomena you come with across a lot of Native English speakers if you do not make the 'we' obvious and clear they say 'WHO IS WE?'
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Today I was at an interesting language exchange. We talked about Liverpool. I was in Liverpool last weekend for tourism, and I like this city. I think it's small and comfortable. The weather was the typical English time weather (raining and cloudy) but I like rain. I visited the Albert Dock, the Beatles museum, and the main cathedral. and I would definitely like to live in an English city. I love the language and multicultural society, but If I move to live in GB I would always come back (return) to Spain to spend time in the Summers. :)
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