hello could you check my English sentences?🤗 Long long years ago, a charcoal dealer leaved in the town with his wife and children. He always made charcoals and took it to the market to sell. Even though they were poor, they were always happy. It was a day he’s going to the market. Wife told the charcoal dealer with a worried look. “Be careful at the 3 Year’s heal” “Ok, I’ll get back quickly.” On the way to market, there was a hill called ‘3 Year’s heal’. It named because if someone falls there, that person only can live 3 years. On that night, when he got back home, he cried out loud and said  “My life’s ruined. I might die soon.” The wife was so surprised “Honey, What happened?” “I fall at the Three year’s hill.” “What? Really? ” She was shocked and her face got green with fear.  “What can we do without you?” “How can I only live 3 years?” With anxiousness, he lied sick in bed.  “The charcoal dealer fell at the 3 Years hill” “How could he made that mistake?” One day, a guy visited the charcoal dealer and said “Hey man, don’t worry. I know the way to live longer” He sighed “Nothing would work out. How can I live long?” “No, you need to do what I’m saying you to do.” Long long years ago, in the mountain village, there lived 2 brothers. Older guy was so greedy and perverse. He only cared about himself and not others. But the younger guy was different. He was diligent and looked after his parents. One day, the younger brother went to the mountain to get some woods. He sweated a lot and put the woods that’s been cut down.  “Phew, it’s hard working. Needs some rest.” While sitting under the tree, he saw some filbert spread there. “Wow! What a big filberts! I’ll take them to parents.” He gathered them to his bag in hurry. The day got darker.  “ok, It’s time to go home” He carried all the woods and got up.  “uleuleung kwangkwang!” The thunder suddenly boomed and crashed and heavy rain started to fall. He quickly looked around to find the place to get in and found the old thatched-roof houses.  “I’ll get in there to take shelter from the rain.” It was too old so it looked like it will break down in a minute and nobody seemed to live there. But he yelled toward the house. “Is anyone there? I’m from the village below there. I’ll stay here until the rain stops.” And he went in to the house.  He felt his way in the dark room and set on the corner of the room. “ho-hum. Why am I so sleepy?” He yawned and his eyes were closed  He pit the straw as a blanket and tried to sleep.