Find a world map or globe, close your eyes, pick a spot. Write about a person arriving there for th
Hello, my dear friend! I write to you from China, one of the biggest countries in the world. It is the first time I arrived that. Life in China has both good and strange things. Well, I will start with the strange.
As you know, Chinese eat food with chopsticks. At first, it was a bit embarrassing to use them but for now, I think it is more suitable than forks. Also, I want to warn you that some local food is very spicy, so, I recommend starting an acquaintance with Сhinese cuisine with Peking duck. I have just ordered this dish in the restaurant near my current apartment and I found it delicious!
I also want to tell you about behavior in China. On the streets, people clear their throats very loudly and spit everywhere! I think it is very disgusting. And the most unlikable thing I faced there is that they don't respect the traffic rules. It seems that the traffic light on their streets is only for decoration.
However, I want to mark good things. Chinese are very friendly to foreigners. It is very cute when they make a photo with you because it is good luck for the Chinese to meet a white person. If you feel ill they thoughtfully recommend you to drink a lot of hot water. Charming!
And was is the most fascinating in China is its beautiful landscapes. Green hills, yellow mountains, long peaceful rivers — it is amazing!
Despite its shortcomings, China is a great country with unique inhabitants.
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Find a world map or globe, close your eyes, pick a spot. Write about a person arriving there for th
Hello, my dear friend! I write to you from China, one of the biggest countries in the world. It is the first time I arrived that there. Life in China has both good and strange things. Well, I will start with the strange.
As you know, The Chinese eat food with chopsticks. At first, it was a bit embarrassing to use them but for now, I think it is more suitable than forks. Also, I want to warn you that some of the local food is very spicy, so, I recommend starting an acquaintance with Сhinese cuisine with Peking duck. I have just ordered this dish in the restaurant near my current apartment and I found it delicious!
I also want to tell you about behavior in China. On the streets, people clear their throats very loudly and spit everywhere! I think it is very disgusting. And the most unlikable thing I faced there is that they don't respect the traffic rules. It seems that the traffic light on their streets is only for decoration.
However, I want to mark good things. The Chinese are very friendly to foreigners. It is very cute when they make take a photo with you because it is good luck for the Chinese to meet a white person. If you feel ill they thoughtfully recommend you to drink a lot of hot water. Charming!
And was what is the most fascinating in China is its beautiful landscapes. Green hills, yellow mountains, long peaceful rivers — it is amazing!
Despite its shortcomings, China is a great country with unique inhabitants.
Good job! Here are my recommendations to the underlined sentences:
"So I recommend introducing an acquaintance to Chinese cuisine with Peking Duck."
"I want to say good things". The word mark may be correct but sounds very awkward used in this context.
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