Is it true story?! I want to tell you one story guys. One day it was very cold evening and everybody in my city wore very warm cloth but not me, I was in my lovely dress. My mood was very great, I was

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Is it true story?! I want to tell you one story guys. One day it was very cold evening and everybody in my city wore very warm cloth but not me, I was in my lovely dress. My mood was very great, I was coming home from my friend's birthday party and thought about great moments of my life.This situation happened when i was really not ready for it. I stood in the subway near the door and this guy was sitting near the door on his place. I was going to come out when he kissed me in my knee. I was really shocked. I started to look around to find somebody who saw this situation because I really didn't know how to react and I was even no sure that this situation was real. When i saw the face of women who was seating across I understood that it was relly happened. The door was open, this guy was sitting with the pockerface, I really didn't know how to react and what to do so I just went out. And now I have the question for you guys! What it was? Was this guy a freak or he just liked my knee? Or mybe was he a maniac? What do you think about this situation?

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Is it a true story?!

I want to tell you ~~one~~ a story, guys. One day, it was a very cold evening and everybody in my city wore very warm clothes, but not me, I was in my lovely dress. My mood was very good, I was coming home from my friend's birthday party and thought about great moments of my life.This situation happened when I was really not ready for it. I was on the subway, standing near the door and this guy was sitting on his seat near the door ~~place~~. I was going to ~~come out~~ get off when he kissed me on my knee. I was really shocked. I started to look around to find somebody who saw this situation because I really didn't know how to react and I wasn't even no sure that this situation was real. When I saw the face of a woman who was seating ~~across~~ opposite, I understood that it ~~was~~ had really happened. The door was open, this guy was sitting with ~~the~~ a poker face, I really didn't know how to react ~~and~~ or what to do, so I just ~~went out~~ got off. And now I have ~~the~~ a question for you guys! What was it? Was this guy a freak, or did he just liked my knee? Or maybe he was a maniac? What do you think about this situation?

Not bad, Julia.

Be careful with the articles, "the" and "a". "The" is for something specific, for example, "the door", because it was a particular one. "A" when it could be any one. However, when we talk about things in general, we don't need any article, for example, apples are red. "One" is only used as a number.

We get ON and OFF vehicles - planes, trains, boats, buses, bikes,etc, with the exception of cars, which we get IN or OUT of.

I hope that helps. And please, don't worry about mistakes - we can learn from them. Keep practicing! Simon.

Is it a true story / Is this story true?!

I want to tell you a story guys. One day it was very cold during the evening and everybody in my city wore very warm clothing except for me. I was in my lovely dress. My mood was very great, I was coming home from my friend's birthday party and thought about great moments of my life.

This situation happened when i was really not ready for it. I stood in the subway near the door and this guy was sitting near the door in his seat. I was going to come out when he kissed me on my knee. I was really shocked. I started to look around to find somebody who saw this situation because I really didn't know how to react and I was not even sure that this situation was real. When i saw the face of women who were seating across I understood that it was really happened. The door was open, this guy was sitting with the poker face, I really didn't know how to react and what to do so I just went out. And now I have the question for you guys! What was this? Was this guy a freak or he just liked my knee? Or maybe he was a maniac? What do you think about this situation?

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