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Dear Mr Peterson,
Thank you for contacting us. We have received your letter of December 23.
Unfortunately, your products has non-competitive prices. Also, we was disappointed because order was not performed correctly.
Have your company changed delivery and payment terms?
We would like to discuss the question of discount as well. We could agree for cooperation with one provision. Your company will give us a 3% quantity discount for one and big consignment.
Would it be possible to meet you either in Moscow or St. Petersburg to discuss this further? We also want to be able to sign the cooperation agreement between our companies.
We should be grateful if you would send us by return mail your latest catalogue and price-list.
If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Moseva Daria
Senior Sales Manager
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing in connection with the change of interest for deposit.
We are delighted to inform you that interest rate have increased to 12% due to government regulations.
We value your custom highly. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Moseva Daria
Personal financial advisor
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing in connection with changes of the government policy for loans.
We regret to inform you that interest rates for loans have increased to 14% due to government regulations.
We value your custom highly. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Moseva Daria
Personal financial advisor
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Hello! Please, can you correct these letters?
Dear Mr Peterson,
Thank you for contacting us. We have received your letter from December 23rd.
Unfortunately, your products have non-competitive prices. Also, we were disappointed because the order was not performed correctly.
Has your company changed delivery and payment terms?
We would like to discuss the question of discount as well. We could agree to cooperation with one provision. Your company will give us a 3% quantity discount for one and a big consignment.
Would it be possible to meet you either in Moscow or St. Petersburg to discuss this further? We also want to be able to sign the cooperation agreement between our companies.
We would be grateful if you would send us by return mail your latest catalogue and price-list.
If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Moseva Daria
Senior Sales Manager
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing in connection with the change of interest for the deposit.
We are delighted to inform you that the interest rate has increased to 12% due to government regulations.
We value your customs highly. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Moseva Daria
Personal financial advisor
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing in connection with changes of the government policy for loans.
We regret to inform you that the interest rates for loans have increased to 14% due to government regulations.
We value your customs highly. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Moseva Daria
Personal financial advisor
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