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begin of my little story I had looked around before i felt in the middle of the living room. I was bleeding. My suit was covered in blood and it was really difficult to breathe. ''Brother, are you at home?'' a girl shouted from the top ''It is fantastic, because my sister will help me'' I thought. She was coming down the stairs. ''Stop, there is no sister in my house. I live alone'' I looked around again. "It was not my house. I must have been confused with the houses''. She was coming towards me. my wounds were too deep for me to treat. I couldn't get up right then. it seemed as if i was in trouble again. She was standing at the door. I was trying to stand up, leaning against the bedside table. "Such a pretty girl is meeting me. Today i am the luckiest man on the planet" that was the smartest thing i could say

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The beginning of my little story

I had looked around before I walked to felt in the middle of the living room. I was bleeding. My suit was covered in blood and it was really difficult to breathe.
''Brother, are you at home?'' Some A girl shouted from above. on top
''It is fantastic, because my sister will help me'' I thought.
She was coming going down the stairs.
''Stop, there is no sister in my house. I lives alone'' I thought. I looked around again. "It's totally It wasn't not my house. I was in the wrong house. just have confused my house.
She was coming towards me.
My wounds were too deep, for me to treat. I couldn't get up right then. It seemed as if I was in trouble. Looked like i was in shit.
She was standing at the door.
I was trying to stand, and leaned against the bedside table.
"Such a pretty girl is coming towards meeting me. Today I am the luckiest man on the ground" , was all I could say .
that was all i could smart enough when she went inside a room
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The beginning of my little story

I had looked around before I moved towards the middle of the living room. I was bleeding. My suit was covered in blood and it was really difficult to breathe.
''Brother, are you at home?'' Some girl shouted from the top.
''This is fantastic, because my sister will help me,'' I thought. She was coming down.
''Stop! There is no sister in my house. I live alone.'' I looked around again. "It's totally not my house. I must have been confused with the houses."
She was coming towards me.
My wounds were too deep for me to treat. I couldn't get up at that very moment. I didn't look pleasant.
She was standing at the door.
I was trying to stand up, leaning against the bedside table.
"Such a pretty girl is meeting me. Today i am the luckiest man on the planet."
That was all I could understand when she went inside a room.

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