Cancun holiday
Can anyone help me fix this / suggest better word choices? Thanks a lot in advance! (?) are the ones I'm not so sure about.
Oct 14, 2019
October is the rainy season as well as the low season in Cancun for tourists. I almost changed my flights seeing consecutive ten days of shower in the weather forecast. Yet the trip turned out to be amazing.
The Hotel Zone, as indicated by its name, is where tourists stay. It is a long-strip island facing the Caribbean sea. Beyond the public beach area where the colourful 'Cancun' landmark is located, the beautiful white sand beach is carved up by extravagant hotels like vultures. The water is crystal, starting from navy blue in a distance to turquoise as it reaches the shore, and transforms (?) into white splash pushing (?) to the beach treasures from the ocean. The simmering light jumps from one wave to another, swiftly, splendidly. The Hotel Zone is gorgeous (?) but I also find it slightly sterile, because it is a delicate paradise built specifically for tourists, like a Las Vegas without casinos.
Then I discovered cenotes, the highlight of my trip. Mexico boasts dozens of cenotes, each with its unique formation (?). I binge-visited cenotes the second day: Cenote Nicte Ha, Dos Ojos Cenote, Cenote Sac Actún.
Cenote Nicte Ha is my favourite of all. It looks more like a pond than a cenote. Because it is overground (?), plants grow under the cool, clear water. Water lilies float (?) on the water, with tiny fish swimming around their stems. The bottom of the picturesque cenote is a mixture of emerald, turquoise, amber colours because of the vegetation and fallen leaves.
Dos Ojos means two eyes in English. This cenote is a semi-open cave, therefore there is no vegetation in the water as the sunlight is blocked by rocks. Cenote Sac Actún is also a cave and I explored the deep of the cave with a guide. The experience was absolutely magical. Inside the cenote, tree roots come all the way down from the jungle above to touch the water, piercing hard rocks.
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Cancun holiday
Can anyone help me fix this / suggest better word choices? Thanks a lot in advance! (?) are the ones I'm not so sure about.
Oct 14, 2019
October is the rainy season as well as the low season in Cancun for tourists. In Cancun October is the rainy season as well as the low season for tourists. I almost changed my flights seeing consecutive ten days of shower in the weather forecast, yet the trip turned out to be amazing.
The Hotel Zone, as indicated by its name, is where tourists stay. It is a long island strip facing the Caribbean sea. Beyond the public beach area where the colourful 'Cancun' landmark is located, the beautiful white sand beach is carved up by extravagant hotels like vultures. The water is crystal clear, starting from navy blue in a the distance to turquoise as it reaches the shore. The water transforms into white splash pushing treasures from the ocean on to the beach. treasures from the ocean. The shimmering light jumps from one wave to another swiftly and splendidly. The Hotel Zone is gorgeous but I also find it slightly sterile, because it is a delicate paradise built specifically for tourists, like a Las Vegas without casinos.
Then I discovered cenotes, the highlight of my trip. Mexico boasts dozens of cenotes, each with its unique formation (?). I binge-visited cenotes the second day: Cenote Nicte Ha, Dos Ojos Cenote, Cenote Sac Actún.
Cenote Nicte Ha is my favourite of all. It looks more like a pond than a cenote. Because it is overground (?), plants grow under the cool, clear water. Water lilies float (?) on the water, with tiny fish swimming around their stems. The bottom of the picturesque cenote is a mixture of emerald, turquoise, amber colours because of the vegetation and fallen leaves.
Dos Ojos means two eyes in English. This cenote is a semi-open cave, therefore there is no vegetation in the water as the sunlight is blocked by rocks. Cenote Sac Actún is also a cave and I explored the deep of the cave with a guide. The experience was absolutely magical. Inside the cenote, tree roots come all the way down from the jungle above to touch the water, piercing hard rocks.
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October is the rainy season as well as the low season in Cancun for tourists. I almost changed my flights after seeing ten consecutive days of showers in the weather forecast. Yet the trip turned out to be amazing. The Hotel Zone, as indicated by its name, is where tourists stay. The island is a long strip of land facing the Caribbean sea. Beyond the public beach area where the colourful 'Cancun' landmark is located, extravagant hotels carve up the white sandy beach like vultures. The water is crystal clear, varying from deep, navy blue in the distance to shimmering turquoise as it laps the shore, and transforms into white splash washing up on the beach treasures from the ocean. The shimmering light jumps from one wave to another, swiftly, splendidly. The Hotel Zone is sumptuous but also slightly sterile, it is a hollow paradise manufactured specifically for tourists, like a Las Vegas without casinos. Then I discovered cenotes, the highlight of my trip. Mexico boasts dozens of cenotes, each with its own unique formation. I binge-visited cenotes the second day: Cenote Nicte Ha, Dos Ojos Cenote, Cenote Sac Actún. Cenote Nicte Ha trumps the rest of them. It resembles a pond more than a cenote. It is aboveground, plants grow under the cool, clear water, the surface is dotted with water lilies, tiny fish swarming around their stems. The bottom of the picturesque cenote is a painter’s palette of emerald, turquoise, amber colours owing to the vegetation and fallen leaves. Dos Ojos means two eyes. This cenote is a semi-open cave, devoid of vegetation, the necessary sunlight cruelly denied by the impenetrable rocks. Cenote Sac Actún is also a cave and I explored some of the cave’s vast depth with a guide. Inside the cenote, tree roots, driven by thirst, penetrate all the way down from the jungle above to reach the water, piercing the hard rocks.
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