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Joanne Rowling aka jk Rowling or Robert Galbraith is a british novelist and scriptwriter. She was born on the thirty first of July nineteen sixty five in the south of England.
She is famous thanks to the series Harry Potter whose book are sold to more than five hundred millions of copies.
In nineteen eighty three, Joanne asks to be registered at Oxford University without success. She will join the Exeter University where she studies French from nineteen eighty three to nineteen eighty seven. She’ll finish her studies with « average » honors.
At 25 years, jk Rowling starts to imagine and build the first lines of Harry Potter’s magical world.
Acclaimed by her readers and critics, she won many literary awards and received the Knights Cross of the Honor’s Legion in two thousand and nine.
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Can you correct me please ?
Joanne Rowling aka jk Rowling or Robert Galbraith is a british novelist and scriptwriter. She was born on the thirty first of July nineteen sixty five in the south of England.
She is famous thanks to the series Harry Potter whose book are sold to more than five hundred millions of copies.
In nineteen eighty three, Joanne asks to be registered at Oxford University without success. She will join the Exeter University where she studies French from nineteen eighty three to nineteen eighty seven. She’ll finish her studies with « average » honors.
At 25 years old, jk Rowling starts to imagine and build the first lines of Harry Potter’s magical world.
Acclaimed by her readers and critics, she won many literary awards and received the Knights Cross of the Honor’s Legion in two thousand and nine.
Mohammad already got all the other corrections, although his translation works, I think "at 25 years old" is clearer. There is nothing wrong with either translation
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Can you correct me please ?
Joanne Rowling aka jk J. K. Rowling or Robert Galbraith is a british British novelist and scriptwriter. She was born on the thirty first of July nineteen sixty five in the south of England.
She is famous thanks to the series Harry Potter whose book are sold to have sold more than five hundred millions of copies.
In nineteen eighty three, Joanne asks applied to be registered at Oxford University without success. She will join joined the Exeter University where she studies studied French from nineteen eighty three to nineteen eighty seven. She’ll finish finished her studies with « average » honors.
Acclaimed by her readers and critics, she J. K. Rowling won many literary awards and received the Knights Cross of the Honor’s Legion in two thousand and nine.
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