大家好!请检查我的作文, 改正错误. 多谢! Hi! Can you please check my homework?
大家好!请检查我的作文, 改正错误. 多谢! Hi! Can you please check my homework?
我喜欢冬天。我想放松的家庭。我们会去北京。 我爱大熊猫。 我妈妈喜欢真茶。
我们会去意大利。 将有听到美丽的音乐。我想去动物园。看看美丽的动物。
谢谢你!
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我喜欢冬天。
perfect
我想放松的家庭。
Do you mean "my family want to have a relax"
Or"I want a relaxed family situation"
我们会去北京
perfect
我爱大熊猫。
Perfect
我妈妈喜欢真茶。
My mom really like tea?
我妈妈真的喜欢茶
我们会去意大利。
Perfect
将有听到美丽的音乐。
将会听到优美的音乐
我想去动物园。
perfect
看看美丽的动物。
perfect
谢谢你!
Perfect
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