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墨尔本的天气 现在是春天,昨天的天气暖和。今天的天气比昨天不好,会下雨了。天气预报说下午更坏,不但有暴雨,而求有雷电。我决定我会去看电影。

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墨尔本的天气

现在是春天,昨天的天气暖和。今天的天气比昨天不好没昨天好,会下雨了。天气预报说下午更坏,不但有暴雨,而求而且有雷电。我决定我会去看电影。

而求而且:为什么你们学中文的,都喜欢犯这种错误。不要有这种同音错别字,让人猜都猜不到你们的意思。
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墨尔本的天气

现在是春天,昨天的天气很暖和。今天的天气比昨天不好没有昨天的好*,会下雨了**。天气预报说下午天气更坏,不但有暴雨,而求而且有雷电。我决定我会去看电影。

*You can also say "今天的天气比昨天的差".
**“了” at the end of a sentence neither indicates a change of the situation or shows an action has been done. If you simply mean "It will rain", there is no need to use "了".


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