My first marathon
I remember my first marathon. My purpose was to finish the race, I didn't want to target a specific time, just finish.
For my preparation, I ran three to four times per week with a long outing once a week during twelve weeks.
The D-day arrived fastly, and lack of chance, the weather was execrable, I should deal with rain and wind.
I didn't feel the thirst so I think I didn't drink sufficiently.
Until the first thirsty kilometers, my course was flow, but after I began to have muscle cramps. More I advanced, more they intensified, they seems to be electric current, I suffered a lot, it was if I struggled against myself.
Fortunately, my friends ran with me, and they supported me, they gave me their hands, and it pushed myself to continue.
Finally, I had arrived after four hours and thirty minutes, but I didn't know walking.
In despite of the pain, it was a good experience, I accomplished my objective and I am proud of it.
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My First Marathon {Main words in titles are capitalized}
I remember my first marathon. My purpose was to finish the race, I didn't (necessarily) [1] want to target a specific time, just finish.
For my preparation {Or: To prepare for it}, I ran three to four times per week with a long outing {or: long run} [2] once a week during for twelve weeks.
I didn't feel the thirsty, so I think I didn't drink sufficiently. {more natural=enough}
Fortunately, my friends ran with me, and they supported me. They gave me their a hand, [5] and it pushed myself {more natural: me} to continue.
Finally, I had arrived after four hours and thirty minutes, but I didn't know walking. (?) [6] {couldn't even walk?}
- Optional, but sounds a little better.
- In running, we use terms like "long run", "short/recovery run", "intervals" (running with sprints/bursts of acceleration).
- Or: "It felt like electric current."
- "I was suffering" would be equivalent to «imparfait».
- Even in a collective, we would say "they gave me a hand." Another way to express this sentiment is: "they supported me."
- I wasn't sure if you meant that by the end, you couldn't even walk, or that in order to complete the race, you had to walk for a portion of it, and didn't run the entire course.
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