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Theme: To make friends is easier than to keep them.
There is no doubt that we cannot imagine our life without friendship. Some people are certain that to maintain friendship is more difficult than to start it up. However, not everyone supports this idea.
To my mind, keeping friends is easier than making them. Firstly, to build friendship a person had to step out of her or his comfort zone and it can be a problem for introverts. At the same time, communicating with close friends does not require overcoming oneself. Secondly, connection with intimate friends is more substantial because often friends have the similar interests and no communication barriers between them.
However, there is an opinion that to stay friends is harder than to befriend new people. People who support this idea are certain that it is more interesting to change ones circle of communication all time and, as a result, to broaden ones outlook.
Nevertheless, I cannot agree with this opinion because if a person has many impermanent friends she or he cannot know a lot about his or her personality and just will be unsatisfied with this communication and as a result never find somebody who will be with ones during whole life.
In conclusion, I would like to say that keeping friends is more important than to making new ones because of much advantages of long friendship and big feedback given from slide friends. thanks*
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