Bon Jovi
I was at Wanda Metropolitano this summer. It was in the concert of Bon Jovi. I was really very excited in this concert like in another concerts I have been. Perhaps, It is not the best concert of Bon Jovi but I realized how I like Bon Jovi. This is not the best moment of the band but I enjoyed the concert how if I was the first concert to me. To listen to songs like " In these arms" or "living on a prayer" is very enjoyable and I can still feel my feelings like I was young. I am also waiting the new album to next year and I hope they will come back to Spain.
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Bon Jovi
I was at Wanda Metropolitano this summer for the Bon Jovi.concert. I was really very excited at this concert like at another concerts I have been to. Perhaps it wasn't the best Bon Jovi concert , but I realized how much I like Bon Jovi. This is not the best moment of the band (for the band) but I enjoyed the concert as if it was the first concert to me.(I enjoyed the concert a lot, as if it were my first time at one of their concerts). Listening to songs like " In these arms" or "living on a prayer" is very enjoyable and I can still feel how I felt when I was young. I am also waiting for the new album to come out next year. I hope they will come back to Spain (soon).
Notes: (Sorry, I know that all these English prepositions can make English language learners CRAZY!):
In your sentence, I was excited at the concert. This means (to me) When I was at the concert, I was excited. If you mean going to the concert excited you (meaning you were looking forward to the concert), I would write: I was excited ABOUT the concert.
most common:
excited about something - I'm excited about the party. I'm excited about the concert (I can't wait for something to occur/happen)
excited that (that is, no preposition)- I'm excited that you'll be able to come to my party. excited for something - I'm excited for the school year to begin.
excited at -- She was excited at the thought that after the concert, she would get to go backstage and meet her idol
excited for someone else (for something that is going to happen to the other person, for something the other person is going to do)
A. I'm going to go backstage after the concert tonight!
B. Wow! I'm excited for you.
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