Car trouble
In summer holidays, our family were driving back to our home, when the air conditioner suddenly stopped. It's 34℃/94F outside and it's still about 300km/186miles left to get home.Our car dealer were closed during special summer holidays and I contacted the customer support and she said " It seems there is something wrong with the air compressor. Does you car still run?" I said "Yeah." So we decided to drive as fast as we can to go home and stopped by the convenience store to buy lots of ice and frozen bottled drinks. We sweat a lot but it was so funny too, because nobody on highways opened their windows.Luckily the roads were not congested. After all, it gave us a nice memory.
I'm goint to pick my fixed car later today.
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Car trouble
I'm going to pick up my fixed car later today.
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