21/100 Invitation to see Coringa
Hi Monica, would you like to go to a movie?
Yeah, it's going to be cool. What's the movie?
Coringa, I hear of it received a eight-minutes ovation on the opening night at Venice Festival, isn't that great?
Yeah, it must be an excellent film.
Guess who's makes the Coringa Monica.
I have no idea! Have you already seen the movie? Please don't give away the ending.
I haven't seen the movie Monica, I've seen the trailer and the actor is Joaquin Phoenix , the same makes Johnny and June as Johnny Cash and Gladiator as Commodus
I got it Steve, I'm sorry sometimes I'm slowpoke.
Steve do you mind if my sister will came along us?
No, it'll be great
Ok, see you tomorrow.
I have set a challenge for myself, to write one entry per day for one hundred days. Please, help me to correct my notebook entries.
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21/100 Invitation to see Coringa
Hi Monica, would you like to go to a movie? (Would you like to go to the movies? Want to go to the movies?)
Yeah, that would be be cool. (yeah, that'd be cool) What's the movie? (What movie?)
Coringa, I hear it received (got) an eight-minute ovation on the opening night at the Venice Festival. Isn't that great?
Yeah, it must be an excellent film.
Guess who's in Coringa?
I have no idea! Have you already seen the movie? Please don't give away the ending.
I haven't seen the movie Monica, I've seen the trailer and the main actor is Joaquin Phoenix (and it starts Joaquin Phoenix) , the same actor who was Johnny in "Johnny and June" and Commodus in "Gladiator"
I got it Steve, I'm sorry, sometimes I'm a slowpoke.
Steve, do you mind if my sister comes along with us?
No, that would (that'd) be great
Ok, see you tomorrow.
I have set a challenge for myself, to write one entry per day for one hundred days. Please, help me to correct my notebook entries.
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