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False Belief 2 Another story. Back in my elementary school, I believed something. It came from my mom. I would often sew something like apron or clothes which were my home work. I would do it on my bed. Back then, I didn't have my own room as I grew up in a small housing project apartment. All I could use was the place on the bed. But my mom told me not to sew them on my bed. She explained it to me like this. " If you lose your needle and slept, while sleeping, the needle will get into your body and flow all of your body through vein and at last it will stab your heart and you will die.” Then one day, I fell asleep while sewing. When I woke up, the needle was gone. I tried to find it but I couldn’t. I thought “GOSH! I’m gonna die today.” I couldn’t tell my mom because I did something she didn’t allow. I left my apartment to go to school. I was concerned about it all day. After school, I finally decided to make confession. I said with my eyes tears. “ Mom, I’m gonna die today” She said”What? What happened?” I explained it to my mom and she started to smile and said. “ You are not gonna die. I just wanted to warn you” I remembered that I was so relieved! When I think back it was impossible that the needle gets in my body!! I was such a gullible girl.

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False Belief 2

Another story. Back in my elementary school, I believed something. It came from my mom. I would often sew something like an apron or clothes which were my homework. I would do it on my bed. Back then, I didn't have my own room as I grew up in a small housing project apartment. All I could use was the place on the bed. But my mom told me not to sew them on my bed. She explained it to me like this. " If you lose your needle and slept, while sleeping, the needle will get into your body and flow through all of your body through your veins and in the end it will stab your heart and you will die.” Then one day, I fell asleep while sewing. When I woke up, the needle was gone. I tried to find it but I couldn’t. I thought “GOSH! I’m gonna die today.” I couldn’t tell my mom because I did something she didn’t allow. I left my apartment to go to school. I was concerned about it all day. After school, I finally decided to make confession. I said with tears in my eyes. “ Mom, I’m gonna die today” She said”What? What happened?”
I explained it to my mom and she started to smile and said. “ You are not gonna die. I just wanted to warn you” I remember that I was so relieved! When I think back it was impossible that the needle could have entered my body!!
I was such a gullible girl.

Excellent, well done :)

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