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It's dawn! It's dawn! the sun is getting up. The sun patted the grass speaking softly, “It's dawn!” The grasses straighten up waist and looked energetic. The sun touch top of flowers laughed and said, “It's dawn!” The flower looked up and looked energetic. The sun stretching arms shook hands with the tree and said, “It's dawn!” The tree also told the sun good morning. The sun went quietly to my bed kiss on my face. I open my eyes laughed and said, “good morning!”

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It's dawn!

It's dawn!
the sun is getting up. ('the sun is rising' is an alternative, but yours works nice for this story)

The sun patted the grass speaking softly, “It's dawn!”
The grasses straightened up their waists and looked energetic.

The sun touched the top of the flowers laughed, and said, “It's dawn!”
The flowers looked up and looked energetic.

The sun stretching its arms shook hands with the tree and said, “It's dawn!”
The tree also told the sun good morning.

The sun went quietly to my bed and placed a kiss on my face.
I opened my eyes, laughed and said, “good morning!”

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