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I’m taking an exam next week. Please help with my writing. It’s a review St George Hotel Do you know that feeling of having made a huge mistake when you book supposedly an amazing and cheep hotel but it turns out to be a disgusting place? I will tell you my experience at St George Hotel which is located near one of the most important train station of London, Paddington. However, despite the amazing situation of the hotel and the charm of the Victorian house where it was built, everything else was disappointing. As for the staff, the attention received was far from nice. The receptionist was unsociable and pettish. He barely gave us instructions about the accommodations nor heads-up about interesting places in the area. The overall condition of the rooms were filthy. Much to my horror the curtains had multiple tears and the shower was covered with mould. The were no wardrove or any kind of furniture besides the bed and a small table with a kettle and some bags of soluble coffee impossible to dissolve due to its rock consistency. The breakfast, allegedly include, consisted of a small box with three muffins, a juice and a bar of chocolate. Besides, as there weren’t any lounge, you had to take your small box and go to your tiny room. In brief, I don’t recommend this place that, although is well situated can ruin your precious holydays.

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I’m taking an exam next week. Please help with my writing. It’s a review

St George Hotel

Do you know that feeling of having made a huge mistake when you book (supposedly) a supposedly amazing and (cheep) cheap hotel but it turns out to be a disgusting place?
I will tell you about my experience at St George Hotel which is located near one of the most important train stations of London, Paddington. However, despite the amazing (situation) location of the hotel and the charm of the Victorian house where it was built, everything else was disappointing.
As for the staff, the attention received was far from nice. The receptionist was unsociable and pettish. He barely gave us instructions about the accommodations nor heads-up about interesting places in the area.
The overall condition of the rooms (were) was filthy. (single/plural agreement... The overall condition was filthy. The rooms were filthy. Or... The conditions were filthy.) Much to my horror the curtains had multiple tears and the shower was covered with mould. The were no (wardrove) wardrobes or any kind of furniture besides the bed and a small table with a kettle and some bags of insoluble coffee impossible to dissolve due to its rock consistency.
The breakfast, allegedly included, consisted of a small box with three muffins, a juice and a bar of chocolate. Besides, as there weren’t any areas to lounge, you had to take your small box and go to your tiny room.
In brief, I don’t recommend this place that, although is well situated, can ruin your precious (holydays) holidays.

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