He made me wait for him
Today was my day off and I wanted to sleep in. Andy woke me up at 7 o'clock. After I had made breakfast for him, Andy said, "Let's go for a walk." He made me put up his jacket and lead, I put up my coat, we both were ready.
I wanted to hurry home to watch my favorite TV show, but andy made me walk slowly. We met a new dog in the neighborhood. Andy is a really friendly dog. He made me wait for him while he made a new friend.
We got to the park Andy wanted to lie down the grass. I laid down next to him, we both fell asleep. When we woke up, it was time for lunch. Andy carries me to a dog cafe near the park. I ordered a coffee and Andy ordered some dog treats.
After a couple of hours, we decided to go home. On the way, we met Sammy one of Andy's friends and his owner. They let us inside, we had some dessert. Andy was tired, so am I. We decided to go home again. Well, we had a perfect day.
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He made me wait for him
Today was my day off and I wanted to sleep in. Andy woke me up at 7 o'clock. After I had made breakfast for him, Andy said, "Let's go for a walk." He made me put uponhis jacket and lead, I put up onmy coat, and we both were ready.
I wanted to hurry home to watch my favorite TV show, but andyAndy made me walk slowly. We met a new dog in the neighborhood. Andy is a really friendly dog. He made me wait for him while he made a new friend.
We When wegot to the park Andy wanted to lie down the grass(or “we got to the park, and Andy…). I laid down next to him, and we both fell asleep. When we woke up, it was time for lunch. Andy carrieds(though really “pulled me” or “dragged me” is better) me to a dog cafe near the park. I ordered a coffee and Andy ordered some dog treats. (In the US we often say “doggy treats” because it sounds cuter).
After a couple of hours, we decided to go home. On the way, we met Sammy,one of Andy's friends,and his owner. They let us inside, and we had some dessert. Andy was tired, so am I. We decided to go home again.
Well, we had a perfect day.
“, and” – if youleave off the conjunction “and” it is still correct, and a lot of the time in spoken English we would omit it. But you should only do it a few times every few paragraphs, otherwise it becomes bothersome (this more style than grammar). Also, remember that technically you do need a conjunction there, so don’t get in the habit of never using one.
“Well, ” – another style tip, “well” is like sighing, you sort of emphasizing the result here. So you can start a new paragraph to make it stronger.
You have a really cute dog.
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He made me wait for him
Today was my day off, and I wanted to sleep in. Andy woke me up at 7 o'clock. After I had made breakfast for him, Andy said, "Let's go for a walk." He made me put up his jacket and lead, I put up my coat, we both were ready.
I wanted to hurry home to watch my favorite TV show, but Andy made me walk slowly. We met a new dog in the neighborhood. Andy is a really friendly dog. He made me wait for him while he made a new friend.
We got to the park Andy wanted to lie down the grass. I laid down next to him, we both fell asleep. When we woke up, it was time for lunch. Andy walked with me or came with me to a dog cafe near the park. I ordered a coffee and Andy ordered some dog treats.
After a couple of hours, we decided to go home. On the way, we met Sammy one of Andy's friends and his owner. They let us inside, we had some dessert. Andy was tired, so was I. We decided to go home again. Well, we had a perfect day.
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