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Essay: Scientists should stop interfering with the natural course of nature. Do you agree? Since the mankind was born, science has improved human being lives. However, scientists have created damages to the environment as well. Therefore, I believe that these activities generate problems for the nature, but, on the other hand, people are helped by technology and science. As a consequence, I partially agree with the statement. In this modern era of globalization and technology, experiments and researches, more and more often, are creating issues for our planet such as pollution, flooding and earthquakes. In fact, the use of new technologies to improve the production of a factory could fill the environment with toxic substances. Moreover, the experimentation of a new medicine could create problems for the fauna. To cite an example: an epidemic caused from an injection of chemical substance to a mouse. Obviously, If we looked for on the internet we could find proofs of other comparable issues. However, the work of scientists have always helped to improve our lives. In the past a lot of people died for unknown illnesses and only thanks to scientists the spreading of these epidemics had been stopped. Furthermore, technology has always made easier the life of the mankind. For instance: we can move from a place to another in short time and in safety way, and in the future the situation will improve even more. Therefore, I partially agree that scientists should stop interfering with the natural course of nature because their work makes our lives more safe and comfortable. Obviously, scientists have to take opportune actions to avoid to damage the environment because the limit between what could be useful and what can create damage is very thin. To sum up, if we wanted a more easy live we should accept the above mentioned situation but scientists must pay more attention to our marvellous planet.

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Essay: Scientists should stop interfering with the natural course of nature. Do you agree?

Since the mankind was born, science has improved human being lives life. However, scientists have created damages to the environment as well. Therefore, I believe that these activities generate problems for the nature, but, on the other hand, people are helped by technology and science. As a consequence, I partially agree with the statement.

In this modern era of globalization and technology, experiments and researches, more and more often, are creating issues for our planet such as pollution, flooding and earthquakes. In fact, the use of new technologies to improve the production of a factory could fill the environment with toxic substances. Moreover, the experimentation of a new medicine could create problems for the fauna. To cite an example: an epidemic caused from an injection of chemical substance to a mouse. Obviously, If we looked for on the internet we could find proofs of other comparable issues.

However, the work of scientists have always helped to improve our lives. In the past a lot of people died for because of unknown illnesses, and only thanks to scientists the spreading of these epidemics had been stopped. Furthermore, technology has always made easier the life of the mankind human life easier. For instance, we can move from a place to another in a short amount of time and in safety way safely, and in the future the situation will improve even more.

Therefore, I partially agree that scientists should stop interfering with the natural course of nature because their work makes our lives more safe and comfortable. Obviously, scientists have to take opportune actions to avoid to damageing the environment because the limit between what could be useful and what can create damage is very thin. To sum up, if we wanted a more easy live life we should accept the above mentioned situation but scientists must pay more attention to our marvellous planet.
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Very good! Just a few minor errors, and I changed 'marvellous' to 'marvelous', because while both are correct spelling, you wrote in American English and 'marvelous' is the American spelling. Keep it up!

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