Clothes
Yesterday I decided to go out for some shopping. I wanted to buy an evening gown for Susan's party, stilettos and a coat, maybe a red one. The first shop kinda disappointed me, infact it was too expensive and the quality of the clothes was a little low in my opinion. So I decided to change shop and go for a different one. The second shop was better, I found a very nice evening dress but it costed well over seventy euros and I could spend only just over fifty euros for the dress. However, I decided to try it on, I think it looked very good on me, but I decided not to buy it. The third shop was the best: the vast majority of the dresses costed well under sixty euros and they looked very nice, only a little minority was expensive. I bought a violet dress with long sleeves and high heeled shoes. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a coat which could suit me, but I hope to be luckier next time!
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Hello, Eleonora!
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Yesterday, I decided to go shopping. I wanted to buy an outfit for Susan's party: an evening gown, stilettos and coat, maybe a red one. The first shop disappointed me. It was too expensive, and the quality of the clothes was a little low, in my opinion. So, I decided to go to a different shop. The second shop was better. I found a very nice evening dress, but it was well over seventy euros, and I could spend only a little over fifty euros for a dress. However, I decided to try the dress on anyway. I think it looked very good on me, but I decided not to buy it. The third shop was the best; the vast majority of the dresses were well under sixty euros and they looked very nice. Only a few dresses were expensive. I bought a violet dress with long sleeves and some high heeled shoes. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a coat that suited me, but I hope to be luckier next time!
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Fantastic paragraph! I made some changes to help your writing sound more natural. Make sure you pay attention to the length of your sentences; some of them were a little long, and that can be harder to read!
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Clothes
Yesterday, I decided to go out for some shopping. I wanted to buy an evening gown for Susan's party, stilettos and a coat, maybe a red one. The first shop kinda disappointed me, because it was too expensive and the quality of the clothes was a little low in my opinion. So, I decided to go to another one. The second shop was better, I found a very nice evening dress but it costed over seventy euros and I could spend only about fifty euros for the dress. However, I decided to try it on, I think it did look very good on me, but I decided not to buy it. The third shop was the best, a vast variety of dresses costing under sixty euros and they looked very nice, only some were expensive. I bought a violet dress with long sleeves and high heeled shoes. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a coat which would suit me, but I hope to be luckier next time!
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Clothes
Yesterday I decided to go out for some shopping. I wanted to buy an evening gown for Susan's party, stilettos and a coat, maybe a red one. The first shop kind of disappointed me, in fact it was too expensive and the quality of the clothes was a little low in my opinion. So I decided to change shops and go to a different one. The second shop was better, I found a very nice evening dress but it cost well over seventy euros and I could spend only just over fifty euros for the dress. However, I decided to try it on, I think it looked very good on me, but I decided not to buy it. The third shop was the best: the vast majority of the dresses cost well under sixty euros and they looked very nice, only a few of them were expensive. I bought a violet dress with long sleeves and high heeled shoes. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a coat which could suit me, but I hope to be luckier next time!
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Nice paragraph, Eleonora! The conjugation of "to cost" is very simple in English. See this page: https://en.bab.la/conjugation/english/cost. Keep up the good practice!
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