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Travelling Hello, It's been a long time since I wrote a notebook on Italki. After months of silence, I decided to write something. I had been travelling for 9 months this year through Asia and New Zealand. It was the first time I left my country (France) and travelled that far. It was a very good experience, I really enjoyed the people, places and cultures I discovered. I have now another vision of the world and I quite like it. I would like to give an advice to people who are keen to discover the world but are afraid to jump into the adventure: Do it! you won't regret.

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Travelling

Hello,

It's been a long time since I wrote a notebook on Italki.
After months of silence, I decided to write something.

I had been travelling for 9 months this year through Asia and New Zealand.
It was the first time I left my country (France) and travelled that far.
It was a very good experience, I really enjoyed the people, places and cultures I discovered.
I have now another vision of the world and I quite like it.

I would like to give an advice to people who are keen to discover the world but are afraid to jump into the adventure: Do it! you won't regret it.
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Hi Jeremy! I love your entry. A great message to put out there. I only have two corrections. "to give advice" without the article; and "you won't regret it", with the pronoun. Other than those two very small things, your English is beautiful and I am sure you did well during your travels. Keep travelling and practicing!

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