Is this sentence ok?
Hi There,
can you please help me out with the following sentence?
does the last part "for patients with mature skin" sound ok? I mean how it connects to the other part of the sentence..I am not sure .. thank you! :)
"Thread lifts are best suited to patients with minimal sagging, who need just a small lift, but it’s not intended to replace a traditional face-lift procedure for patients with mature skin."
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Hello!
I believe this sounds fine! However, I highlighted a suggested correction to ensure the sentence is a bit more natural.
"Thread lifts are best suited to patients with minimal sagging, who need just a small lift, but they are not intended to replace a traditional face-lift procedure for patients with mature skin."
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