My profesional Career
A few years ago I really didn't know what my career was going to be I haven't decided yet until onw day a friend invited me to a talk at one of the universities of my country where the dean began talking us about the benefits of studying because of the job oportunities and my mother and I really needed the money,so I I took the oportunity when I assited to my first class and I realized what I was about to learn I felt very excited,some of my classmates quit from the career,but I decided to continue studying at the beginning was very difficult for me trying to understand but I spent a lot of time until I was able to understand and It became fun for me and very enjoyable at the same time studying software developing has caused a great impact on my life because I always have gotten work currently It is one of the most demanded careers around the world and now I know how a decision can impact our lives, on these days I am practicing my English at home and I feel very positive however I need to be discipline with myself to achieve all my goals
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My profesional Career
A few years ago, I really didn't know what my career was going to be. One day a friend invited me to a talk at one of the universities in my country. The dean began talking to us about the benefits of studying because of the job oportunities. My mother and I really needed the money, so I I took the oportunity and decided to go to the university. When I attended my first class and I realized what I was about to learn I felt very excited. Some of my classmates quit their studies, but I decided to continue. At the beginning, it was very difficult for me to understand but I spent a lot of time until I was able to understand and It became fun for me and very enjoyable at the same time.
Studying software development has had a great impact on my life because I have always gotten work (OR because I have always been able to find work) currently It is one of the most demanded careers around the world. Now I understand how a decision can impact our lives. These days I am practicing my English at home and I feel very positive. However, I need to be more disciplined with myself to achieve all my goals.
Your writing is quite good. However, you need to be careful not to write super-long sentences with no periods. Give your readers a break! The best thing to do is to read your work out loud. You can hear (in your head) where the commas and periods are supposed to be -- Put them in!!!!
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