Airplane
Humans cannot travel long distances by their own. To be fair, we can walk, but it would take a time that no one in our society is willing to spend. To fulfill our need to move from place to place, some extraordinary people have developed transportation vehicles that can led us anywhere. Bicycles, automobiles and airplanes are examples of that and this text will explore latter one regarding how it has changed people’s live through its history.
The airplane’s major quality is that people from one place to other in the shortest period of time possible. Someone born in the 21th century can get to know places really far from where they were born, places that their ancestors could only be a little familiar by reading books. Before the invention of this main of transportation, people needed to spend months in a ship to go from Portugal to Brazil, for example. Now the connection Rio-Lisbon only takes seven hours. That is the magic of airplanes.
However, its impact on people’s life is not only positive. Even though most of the time it is used to transport people to where they want to be, airplanes are also used as war machines in war confronts. It is safe to say that the world war one was so massive and destructive partially because of the power of bomb dropping and shooting provided by airplanes.
Given this points, it is obvious that the airplane’s invention made a great impact on how the world thinks transportation in contemporary life. As any other machine and artefact made by humans, it can be used for good purposes or bad ones, but in general, it has improved lives.
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Airplane
Humans do not have the capabilities of travelling long distances by their own. We do have the ability to walk. However, it would take a time that many are not willing to spend. To fulfill our need to move from place to place, some inventors have created transportation vehicles that can lead us anywhere. Bicycles, automobiles and airplanes are examples of the many created transportation methods over time. This text will explore latter one regarding how it has changed the way of living throughout history.
The main quality of an airplane is that people can travel from one place to other in the shortest period of time possible. Someone born in the 21th century can get to know places really far from where they are. An example is places that their ancestors could only know little about. Before the invention of this main of transportation, people needed to spend months in a ship to perhaps go from Portugal to Brazil. Now, the connection "Rio-Lisbon" only takes around seven hours. That is the magic of airplanes.
However, its impact on people’s life is not only positive. Even though, most of the time it is used to transport people to where they want to be, airplanes are also used as war machines in war confronts. It is safe to say that World War I was so massive and destructive partially because of the power of the bomb dropping and shooting provided by airplanes.
Given these points, it is obvious that the invention of airplanes have made an enormous impact on how the world's thinks transportation in contemporary life. However, like any other invention made by humans, it can be used for good purposes or bad ones. But in general, they have improved lives.
Extra feedback: Your grammar is amazing. The corrections I made are only to improve the used vocabulary or cut out irrelevant things. Good job!
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