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About the movie, Bird Box The concept of the movie was quite good, which is if I saw someone or something, I will die. So everyone who want to save themselves must cover their eyes to don't die. but I think the ending was not as that good as I thought it would be. I think it could make a lot more dynamic ending because the front part of the movie was so good. So When I was watching the movie, I was expecting that It has a more dynamic ending. It didn't though. but I can recommend it to you to watch it when you have free time.

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About the movie, Bird Box

The concept of the movie was quite good, which is if I saw see someone or something, I will die.
So everyanyone who wants to save themselves must cover their eyes, to don't or they will die.
But I thought the ending was not as that good as I thought it would be.
I think it could should make a lot have a more dynamic ending, because the front first part of the movie was so good.
So, When while I was watching the movie, I was expected that It has it to have a more dynamic ending.
It didn't though.
But I can recommend it to you to watch it when you have some free time.

** Well tried :)) There are some points I changed in order to sound more natural. I hope you find this useful :))

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