August 10
Last weekend, I climbed up Mt. Fuji for the first time in two years with my dormitory friends, ten people in total.
We left for our dormitory at 13:00 for the fifth station of Mt. Fuji, and reached there at around 18:00. After wearing trekking shoes, headlight, gloves, and so on, we set off to the sumit at 19:30.
Since it was a night climbing, I was able to see a lot of beautiful stars in the sky. Given a chance, I would like to take pictures by high resolution camera (for now, I don't have it, though).
As I got closer to the sumit, my heart got started to pump fast. I think it was caused by high altitude. I felt like throwing up, but I was barely able to reach the sumit without vomiting.
When I reached the sumit, I could not say anything because of joy and exhaustion. One of our companions told us that he would never join this climbing event again because it was too hard for him.
In my case, I also may not join this event for the next few years. However, I really did a nice experience.
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Last weekend, I climbed up Mt. Fuji for the first time in two years with my dormitory friends, ten people in total.
We left for our dormitory at 13:00 for the fifth station of serving Mt. Fuji, and reached got/arrived there at around 18:00. After wearing putting on trekking shoes, headlightlamps, gloves, and so on, we set off to the summit at 19:30. It's uncommon to combine "reach" with "here" or "there". In America, we call flashlights that we wear on our heads "headlamps", and we call the lights at the front of a car "headlights". You put on clothes when you change from not wearing them to wearing them: "Bob was only wearing a t-shirt, so I told him to put on a jacket so he wouldn't get cold."
Since it was a night climbing, I was able to see a lot of beautiful stars in the sky. Given a chance, I would like to take pictures by with a high resolution camera (for now, I don't have it one, though). You are not thinking of one specific camera, you are thinking of ANY high-resolution camera, so you should use "one" instead of "it": "I love this camera. IT was given to me by my grandfather." "I've heard great things about this type of camera, but I've never used ONE."
As I got closer to the summit, my heart got started to pump fast. I think it was caused by the high altitude. I felt like throwing up, but I was just barely able to reach the summit without vomiting.
When I reached the summit, I could not say anything because of the joy and exhaustion. One of our my companions told us that he would never join participate in this climbing event again because it was too hard for him.
In my case, I also may not join also skip this event for the next few years. However, I really did have a nice experience.
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August 10
Last weekend, I climbed up Mt. Fuji for the first time in two years with my dormitory friends; we were ten people in total.
We left for our dormitory at 13:00 for the fifth station of Mt. Fuji, and reached there at around 18:00. After putting on trekking shoes, headlights, gloves, etc., we set off for the summit at 19:30.
Since it was a night climb I was able to see a lot of beautiful stars in the sky. Given the chance, on my next hike, I would like to take pictures with a high resolution camera (for now, I don't have one, though).(I would like to take/shoot some high-resolution pictures)
As I got closer to the summit, my heart got started to pump fast. I think it was caused by the high altitude. (I think it was because of the high altitude) I felt like throwing up, but I was barely able to reach the summit without vomiting.
When I reached the summit, I could not say anything because of joy and exhaustion. One of our companions told us that he would never join this climbing event again because it was too hard for him.
In my case, I also may not join this event (do this climb) for the next few years. However, I really had a nice experience. (better: It was a nice experience OR It was a really nice experience)
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